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World war who?

02-Sep-10

Daniel Swift, a young British literary critic, sets out to solve the riddles of literary and familial history in his new book, Bomber County. The volume combines criticism and memoir, and discusses both the under-appreciated poetry of World War Two and the mysterious life of Swift’s grandfather, who served, and died, as an RAF pilot.  In the New York Times, Dwight Garner praises Swift’s inventive cocktail:

This book’s twin stories — about one man, and about one war’s poetry — begin in the same graveyard. Along with his own father, James Eric Swift’s son, who was 3 when his father died, the author visits the cemetery in the Netherlands where his grandfather is buried. He notes the severe uniformity of the wartime headstones, but also this: that many headstones have scraps of poetry on them.

“The graves were quoting one another,” he observes, and “they were carrying on a conversation in verse.”

He moves from this awareness to make two points about the poetry of World War II. One, that it is mostly undervalued. Two, that the best and most representative of it, and the most morally complicated, is the poetry of air bombing.

“Bombing was to the Second World War what the trenches were to the First,” Mr. Swift writes, “a shocking and new form of warfare, wretched and unexpected, and carried out at a terrible scale of loss.”

What you reading there?

02-Sep-10
Here’s an essay from a friend down south – all the way in Columbus – Scott Woods, poetry champion extraordinaire. This piece first ran at Got Poetry dot Com and is reprinted here with the author’s permission:
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I was at the National Poetry Slam in St. Paul a couple of weeks ago (awesome time) and I noticed something right away: there were a lot more competitors reciting poetry from paper than usual. I mean, to the point of comment.

scottwoodsOn one hand, this delighted me a great deal. In any given year I’m usually one of about three paper poets (a poet that performs a poem from paper or a journal or some other vehicle of codification) out of about nearly four hundred poets who show up to compete. Most people who consider themselves performance poets memorize, and in slam competitions particularly so. I can’t tell you how many times over the years I’ve heard from poets or audience members or judges that poems that are memorized are somehow better than ones that aren’t. There is the notion that a poet who bothers to commit their work to memory is somehow more dedicated to their craft than the poet who does not. I ask you, which poet is more dedicated: the poet who memorizes ten poems that they recite at every featured reading they have over the course of a few years, or the poet who performs ten times that number in the same amount of time, but from paper?

I have made a conscious decision not to memorize any of my poetry. It is, quite literally, a mission with me. I’ve memorized poetry in the past to see if I could do it, and when I did the results were pretty impressive. But in the end I have dedicated myself to not memorizing poems because I want poets to know that memorizing a poem doesn’t have to be the entry fee to performance poetry. You can still win slams – even the big ones – from paper. You can still give incredible features and do tours from paper. You can still make an audience lose its complete and utter mind from paper. It all comes down to the poem and how deeply you’re willing to commit to giving a performance of that poem.

I lay no claim whatsoever that my platform of performing from paper only had anything to do with the amount of paper I saw in slam competition this year. I think a case could be made, and I’ve certainly heard things over the years from coaches that imply my mission has had some effect. Whatever the reason is for more paper performances this year I don’t care…I’m just glad the day of acknowledging the power of papyrus has returned.

Not that it wasn’t here along, mind you: any random poetry reading that isn’t swamped with people trying to show their performance chops in equal measure to their writing chops will be a reading filled with paper. There are more poets reading from paper than there are poets who aren’t on the whole, so in the grand scheme of things it’s not that big a deal. It only really matters in those circles that place a premium on performance over writing ability.

Anyhow, while I ultimately do not care about who’s doing what for what reason, I do care about The Big Four. A while back I drafted four rules about performing poetry from paper. Application of these rules is sorely lacking in performances I see everywhere I go:
1. Commit.
2. Voice compensates for body.
3. You aren’t allowed to fuck up.
4. It always comes down to the poem.

1) Commit.
Knowing is not memorizing. I can recite back parts of my poems, but at some point I need my line fed to me because while I know my poems pretty well, I do not have them memorized.
Also, reading is not performing. Sounding like you’re reading makes me feel like I’m in school. I hated school, especially the poetry units. We can all try a little harder in this area.

2) Voice compensates for body.
If you’re performing from paper, you’re already down a hand or two, or blocked by a music stand. The audience will have a hard time not noticing these things. Adopt the principle that if you lose one thing you should compensate for it by amplifying another. After your poem, your voice is your most powerful tool, not your ability to memorize or move around on stage. The poem starts to live in the performance world when you open your mouth, so use it: play with the texture of your voice, the tone, the rhythm, the breadth of its range of meanings.

Also note that I have been saying “perform”, not “read”. Most problems with poets and paper stem from not making this distinction. Conversely they do two things that make me wish they’d just stop writing poetry altogether: a) they don’t bother to commit to a performance since they’re going to be seen reading from paper anyway, and b) they perform with those annoying gaps every other line (you know: EXCITED SHOUTING! Look for my line. EXCITED SHOUTING! Look for my line…). Neither of these is an excuse for a poor performance from paper. If you can memorize, there is no reason why your reading from paper should suck. In fact it should be easier.

3) You aren’t allowed to fuck up.

This one is pretty unforgiveable to me. If you lose your place in a poem that’s sitting in front of you, then you’re an idiot. People who do this tend to do it because they thought they had more of the poem memorized than they actually do, or they get so caught up in the performance they forget that a part is coming up that they don’t actually remember. Idiots. Look, it’s very simple math:
You – memory of poem = no poem in your head
…so quit pretending you know your poem and invest in some fucking focus.

4) It always comes down to the poem.

This is my answer to everything about poetry, but it really means something here. A great poem will forgive a lot of things, will clear the way for a lot of risks you might take as a performer. Don’t worry about your performance more than your poem. In the end, you want audiences to remember your poem, not that you were really passionate about whatever it was you were up there talking about that they can’t somehow recall under questioning. Everything in life is easier if you start off by doing things correctly right out of the gate.

That’s it.

I love performing poetry, and performing it from paper doesn’t diminish that for me or my audiences. I love pulling out that thick ragged folder – “Goldie” – and embracing the challenge of riffling through it for the perfect poem at the perfect moment. And I won’t let a little thing like memorization stop me from doing this. It may stop me from being asked to do certain gigs, but that’s the booker’s loss. I will fuck your audience up from paper, just as easily as someone who’s flailing about and giving you jazz hands for twenty minutes. I don’t apologize for not memorizing. No one should, if they believe that the work they will present is just as good read as it is memorized AND that they will deliver it with the extra mile required to make that belief true.


The Jorie jury

01-Sep-10

Over at the Best American Poetry site, Dante Michaux offers thought on Jorie Graham’s evolution. He summarizes the analysis of the venerable Vendler, and continues:

By recycling the examples that Vendler offers in her study and adding a few others, it is clear that what is significant, or most consequential in Jorie Graham’s work is not lineation—long or short. The strength of her composition lies in a highly-evolved, demanding addressee and the process by which she communicates with it, called, for the sake of argument, vocative sublimity. The rhythm, grammar, lineation or other such features are rendered differently by Graham depending on unknown variables to the reader but what shapes those features into a whole, the communication with the addressee that exists on the plane of poetic thinking, is consistent. Vocative sublimity might better be defined as thus: “to be knitted up, chainmail of vocables—link / by link— / till even the air all round you suddenly seems to / shine—really now—there where it means, / or means to mean, because mostly of course it is just talk…” (The Errancy, 75). No better understanding of this process is to be found than, perhaps, those lines that limn the geography of a poetic mind and attempt to fix a dialogue that is at once clear and completely metaphysical. The philosopher, Martin Buber, describes the effect of this kind of dialogue on thought and perception: “When I confront a human being as my You and speak the basic word I-You to him, then he is no thing among things nor does he consist of things…[n]eighborless and seamless, he is You and fills the firmament. Not as if there were nothing but he; but everything else lives in his light” (I and Thou, 59). In Graham’s poetry, she is the “I” of Buber’s philosophy and her addressee is the “You”, not as an exercise in egocentrism but in the dynamic of apprentice to omniscient master, always questioning. It would be easy to mistake the object of Graham’s poetry as multiple, as “You” in reality changes, but a prudent position would be to view the object as a singular entity with the ability to be all things at once—much like the relationship between a divinity and the adherents of its cosmology. Her poems seem to state what she has observed and beg notice of what she has observed, the better to question her addressee . . .

of low endings and useful inconclusions

31-Aug-10

this battle about saying or not staying not saying how or this battle about

containers that hadn't considered how to be themselves and wouldn't know

the twinge of one price we'll pay for a singular sort of old shoveling out

you said i'm in the middle of an awful and irreconcilable happiness okay

should look like this:

Oflow
 

Also, Rimaud not actually a boat

31-Aug-10

The Telegraph has the story of Paul Hurt, an animal rights protester who traversed great distances to a Seamus Heaney reading in order to rage against the poet’s perceived love of bullfighting. For evidence, Hurt pointed to Heaney’s love poem “Tate’s Avenue” in which the speaker mentions “getting drunk before a corrida.”

Jonathan Reekie, organizer of the event, thought that perhaps Hurt had taken Heaney’s poem a bit too literally:

The organisers tried to persuade [Hurt] his protest was a folly and the police intervened at one point but he carried on regardless. The organisers even offered him a free ticket but he refused on the ground it would compromise his position.

Eventually he packed up and went home.

Mr Reekie said: “Mr Hurt has got it very wrong – Mr Heaney has written about bullfighting but it was about someone else’s view.

“There is no suggestion that Mr Heaney supports bullfighting.

“He based his protest on a piece that Seamus Heaney wrote about somebody else and there is nothing to suggest Mr Heaney himself supports bullfighting.

“But unfortunately he is not basing it on facts, he is basing it on a misreading of things that Seamus Heaney has written in the past.”

Back home, Mr Hurt is still convinced that he is right.

“This explanation came too late in the day,” he said.

“The awful truth is that Seamus Heaney’s reputation could suffer very badly from his support for bullfighting.”

no more cheating

30-Aug-10

Archaism for cars & planes. Some tales engorge

The morning with an optical tremor. Literally

Light comes … shaking down the birds. Or wasn't

Still deep green forest mud enough … to show us.

“Which is funnier: a comedian performing poetry or a poet trying their hand at comedy?”

30-Aug-10

That’s the question the Guardian asks as it peruses the curious number of stand-up performance poets at this year’s Edinburgh Fringe Festival:

Historically, few genres have faced more derision (or parody) than performance poetry. The common charge? That it’s boring, embarrassing, or both, capable of inducing deep sleep and a clenched sphincter at the same time. Worse still, it’s got a reputation for taking itself too seriously. And to material-thirsty comics, that’s the equivalent of labelling your milk in a communal student fridge.

But this year are we laughing at, or with, the bard? “Don’t worry,” says Hamilton at the start of Eldon’s gig. “This particular poet’s middle name doesn’t happen to be dreary!” And ironically, he’s right.

What approaches cliche in a lesser-spotted comedy show becomes something rather sublime in other hands. We laugh at Key’s poems because they’re so bad, they’re good (and written on Jacob’s Crackers). But sometimes, they’re just good. Period.

Is Poetry Evil? (Plato thought so.)

30-Aug-10


In today’s Opinionator column at the New York Times, Alaxander Nehamas reminds us about Plato’s arguments that poets should be banished from his ideal society, and suggests that Plato’s arguments may still apply to our times.

Plato knows how captivating and so how influential poetry can be but, unlike us today, he considers its influence catastrophic. To begin with, he accuses it of conflating the authentic and the fake. Its heroes appear genuinely admirable, and so worth emulating, although they are at best flawed and at worst vicious. In addition, characters of that sort are necessary because drama requires conflict — good characters are hardly as engaging as bad ones. Poetry’s subjects are therefore inevitably vulgar and repulsive — sex and violence. Finally, worst of all, by allowing us to enjoy depravity in our imagination, poetry condemns us to a depraved life.”


The same reasoning, Nehamas points out, is at the heart of today’s denunciations of mass media.

(Wow– so, Grand Theft Auto will, in a thousand years time, have the same status that Homer’s poetry had in Plato’s time? Well, if Nehamas is right, yes. After all, who are we to judge? We’re not even dead yet!
Plato’s argument was, in brief, that poets make stuff up, and hence is the enemy of truth.
Enemies of truth! Whoa!
Well, now we have talk radio and political bloggers for that. Same thing, I guess.

This Recording on the life and work of Fairfield Porter

28-Aug-10

Porter—a friendly influence on James Schuyler, Frank O’Hara, and Kenneth Koch, among others—gets a little retrospective look at This Recording:

Fairfield kept an apartment on Avenue A, and began to integrate himself into the next generation of poets and artists. His attraction to the young gay poet James Schuyler verged on romance, and Fairfield began to explore his bisexuality. The younger crowd looked up to Fairfield and admired his work, and Elaine de Kooning recommended him to Art News, where he began his second life as a critic. Fairfield’s politics had influenced the faux working-class realism of his first paintings, but the attraction of the art world to Abstract Expressionism was, in part, a rejection of those communist ideas. Now the painter began creating a new critical vocabulary similarly absent from political value.

Already nearing his late 40s, Fairfield was still pursuing a doctrine of free love, but in this case his target was (for a short time) the poet John Ashbery . . .

welcome my daughter

28-Aug-10

Let's get serious about the eventual … I'm usually stuck in biblical allusions but you … The day will have its dog and some coffee … What I'll do I'll … ride around myself in a big dream … and then … pose until a word … about a line of poem or a pesky bladder … secure in its bowl … adequate for details … possesses the distraction … to an end